I need someone to read this and tell me if this makes sense and if it is correct. The test is supposed to be in the past tense. In the morning, my friend Heather and I airbrushed our face. Then we packed hacimos. Then we left the house. Then we went to Chik-fil-A breakfast para. Finally, we went to Santa Cruz. In the afternoon, Heather and I walked along the beach. Attractions After the park being open, I ride a roller coaster and we drank much soda. Then we walked down the beach while we ate ice cream. Eventually, we go shopping. After shopping, we went home. At night, we ate at Carls Jr. While Heather is driving, I talk her friend Brian. Then we heard the song sleep paragraph that Thang "Rockin '" While Speeding house. When I got home, I slept Bathing in the bathroom and my bed.
In the morning, my friend Heather and I got our face makeup. WE After the bags. Then (WE) We left the house. Then we went to Chik-fil-a breakfast para. Finally, we went to Santa Cruz. In the afternoon, Heather and I walked along the beach. After the park of Attractions was open, we we got the roller coaster and drank a soda. Then we walked along the beach while we ate some ice cream. Eventually, we went shopping. IR After purchase, return / back to home. At night, we ate at Carls Jr. Driving While Heather is, I spoke with his friend Brian. After hearing the track sleep "Rockin 'That Thang" While Speeding home. When we got home, I bathed in the bathroom and slept in my bed. CORRECTIONS IN ALL CAPS! INSURANCE YOU SAY INSTEAD of us, or simply Leave Out
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